|The Declarer (Floyd McWilliams' Blog)|
Sunday, March 14, 2004
San Jose Mercury News web page has the following teaser in the portion of the page that one can see without scrolling:
No one could accuse the Merc of bias for this neutral formulation, could they? But what if we substituted another subject for "the retailer"?
Doesn't roll off the tongue quite so easily, now does it? Try this:
I think quite a few people would object to that. How about:
I don't like that one at all.
The Mercury News would be well served to report facts, rather than trying to shape stories to suit its prejudices.